You also repeat the same list for each of your genre videos! This is a bit slack! You should really pull out 2 or 3 particular examples. I also notice you haven't responded to my comments from October! Please address this. Your target is a B- you need to provide more evidence to gain this. JIN
James you need a lot more detail here. It is too sketchy. JIN 13/10/2010
ReplyDeleteYou also repeat the same list for each of your genre videos! This is a bit slack! You should really pull out 2 or 3 particular examples. I also notice you haven't responded to my comments from October! Please address this. Your target is a B- you need to provide more evidence to gain this. JIN
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